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Written for [livejournal.com profile] jlm121 in the ISS kinkmeme, prompt was: Spock is territorial. He considers McCoy his territory. Before he allows McCoy in the presence of others he marks him

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When he first marked McCoy, when he first forced him down on the bed and took his ability to move, though not the ability to feel pain, he only intended to carve the House seal into the skin stretching over the collar bone. But when he slowly and carefully carved the pattern with McCoy's own plasma-cauter, third-degree burns that hurt enough to bring tears to those blue eyes, he found joy, a childish, heartfelt pleasure he had thought to be gone after his mother's death. Then he knew he'd not stop after this single mark of ownership.

He was halfway down McCoy's chest when Kirk tried to lay hands on McCoy; but even the Empire's new hope knew where to draw the line, and Vulcan calligraphy was unmistakable.

The patterns were crawling over McCoy's left hip when Admiral Pike visited the Enterprise and demanded special services. He came as far as seeing McCoy in the nude before he reconsidered and sent the doctor back to Spock with a short note written in ink on his forehead. Spock felt compelled to erase the traces with his own name – the only branding McCoy was allowed to remove the day after.

The others stayed, meandering over his body, speaking of claiming and surrender, of successes and failures until all of McCoy became the book of Spock.
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Next: The Cover

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Date: 2009-09-29 07:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kahvi.livejournal.com
I normally don't like this sort of thing, but this was poetic and lovely, and twistedly romantic.

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Date: 2009-09-29 06:18 pm (UTC)

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Date: 2009-09-29 08:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] graceandfire.livejournal.com
Eek! This was scary and hot!

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Date: 2009-09-29 06:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] syredronning.livejournal.com
Thank you :))

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Date: 2009-09-29 08:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sookail.livejournal.com
Mmm. This was beautiful.

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Date: 2009-09-29 06:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] syredronning.livejournal.com
Glad you liked it :)

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Date: 2009-09-29 09:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zerrah.livejournal.com
That last line was PERFECT. Just, great fic.

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Date: 2009-09-29 06:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] syredronning.livejournal.com
Thank you so much :)

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Date: 2009-09-29 12:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] illariy.livejournal.com
Eeek. That was indeed scarily intense. I like how Spock's emotions escape him but he's not human, he's very Vulcan in his reactions. Also loved the short Pike scene.

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Date: 2009-09-29 06:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] syredronning.livejournal.com
Pike rocks my world. Glad you liked it!

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Date: 2009-09-29 03:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] severinne.livejournal.com
Oh, that was gorgeous. I love the fine balance in Spock's voice here, and the bonus Pike is the best kind of bonus there ever was. *g*

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Date: 2009-09-29 06:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] syredronning.livejournal.com
Glad you liked it!

Bonus Pike rules my world - whenever I get a glimpse of him SOMEWHERE that fic rises in my opinion. Sigh. I'm so easy to please.

.oOHey, how's your Pike/McCoy series coming along?

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Date: 2009-09-29 06:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] severinne.livejournal.com
whenever I get a glimpse of him SOMEWHERE that fic rises in my opinion. Sigh. I'm so easy to please.

You and me both. Pike is one sexy bastard. That's why I wish my Pike/McCoy series was going better. *headdesk* It's the problem of writing out of sequence with too many ideas - I work on a given instalment, then decide I want to know how this other part is going to play out and work on that for a while instead. Meanwhile, I entertain naughty but utterly non-essential ideas for horseback-riding smut and a threesome with Kirk and as a result, NOTHING gets finished. But I've decided that this week, I really need to just choose one story in the series and just finish it already. *emphatic nods*

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Date: 2009-09-29 06:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] syredronning.livejournal.com
It's the problem of writing out of sequence with too many ideas

Gah, I have the same problem! :( Too many open drafts at the moment, and for every story I finish, at least one new draft gets opened. Sigh.

And a threesome with Kirk, PHEW, no complains here ("Raveling" is always open on one Firefox tab here, to get a good fix once in a while :))

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Date: 2009-09-29 08:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] severinne.livejournal.com
I've tried that rule of not starting a new draft until I do finish something, but that takes too much willpower and I'm always afraid of losing a good image if I don't write it down at all. Damn, I'm weak.

I'm glad to hear Raveling is still working for you! It was surprisingly easy to write... damn, I should really just throw plot to the wind and do that threesome, eh? ;)

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Date: 2009-09-29 08:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] syredronning.livejournal.com
Plot is fine but I'd love a good threesome as well :P

*drools*

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Date: 2009-09-29 08:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] syredronning.livejournal.com
P.S. I don't think you're weak, I do the same about writing down good images. Totally okay!

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Date: 2009-09-30 04:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] weepingnaiad.livejournal.com
Perfect Mirror!Verse! *shudders*

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Date: 2009-09-30 05:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] syredronning.livejournal.com
MU is classy nasty *G* Thanks for the feedback!

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Date: 2009-10-01 12:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alder-knight.livejournal.com
ISS? There's a Mirrorverse kink meme?? *dies*

I mean, the STXI kink meme is fun, but I tend to like my kink a little... kinkier.


Whoa, branding, now we're talking. My favorite bit, for whatever reason, is actually Pike sending him back with a handwritten note... on his forehead. Nothing says "object" like using someone for note paper.

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Date: 2009-10-01 05:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] syredronning.livejournal.com
Glad you like it! Hope you have fun in the MU kink meme *G*

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Date: 2009-10-01 05:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] syredronning.livejournal.com
P.S. Damn if you didn't inspire my muses now *thinks about Pike/McCoy*

Though this will probably die over the business day... as many ideas tend to lately. Duh - WORK eats fanfic :P

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Date: 2009-10-01 09:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] diane-kepler.livejournal.com
Vulcan calligraphy, unf! That was exquisite, and the sequel too.

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Date: 2009-10-01 09:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] syredronning.livejournal.com
Thanks for the feedback! :))

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