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What might constitute the epilogue to the Mu Book series. Warning: It's REALLY dark.



The Collector
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The house was large, dark and creepy. It was even creepier when lit, because then he could see all the pieces of skin that hung around like trophies, protected behind glass. They were covered in patterns, many of them gray and green, some with fainting colors. At first, they had looked like some parchment to him, but then he got closer and recognized their form, realizing that what looked like leather now had once spun over living limbs.

"Skin is just a canvas too," the old Klingon said before he shoved the equipment into Tom's hands and then gave the youngster a lesson in how these skins needed to be preserved to be presentable for another hundred years.

He started on the ground floor and then worked up the stairs. He was counting forty-three when he stepped into the private area of the old man and froze. There was the most complete skin of them all, spanned over a doll and protected by glass all around. Not just a back or an arm, but most of a body, all patterned with Vulcan calligraphy. It almost looked like one of those Greek statues he'd seen in some history files, missing hands and feet and the head - and from the way the pattern was abruptly cut at what once had been the throat, the owner had probably lost his head for real.

The pattern was unusual too. It wasn't painted like most others, the boy thought as he reverently opened the translucent door and started applying the first cleanser – must've been burned into the skin in some way.

The old Klingon appeared behind him, and Tom took a heart to ask, "Did you kill them all?" The Klingon barked a laugh. "Many, but not this one. That skin's the oldest of them all, a hundred years for sure."

"Who was the man?" Tom asked.

"I never found out. Bought the skin from another collector, and tracked it down until the Great War where its owner's name was lost for good."

All Tom knew was that the Great War divided the time between Terra's glory and Terra's doom, between dominance and slavery. Being born long after the war, the idea of humans ever having ruled the Empire was unreal to him.

The Klingon brushed over the nameless hide. "You see this?" He pointed at what must have been the collarbone.

"I don't see anything," Tom replied confused.

"Exactly. That's where his House Seal must've been, but it's been etched off his skin with acid. Happened once in a while, but the unusual thing is that it hasn't been substituted with a new one. Well, maybe he was killed before that could happen." The Klingon barked another laugh. "Wasn't very old either, maybe forty."

The boy had a hard time to extrapolate the age of the former owners but nodded anyway, trusting the expertise of the collector. "Not old for a Vulcan."

"It wasn't a Vulcan but a Terran – his blood was red."

Tom swallowed hard, temporarily stopping the appliance of the second cleaning fluid. The race shouldn't make a difference to him, but for some strange reason it did.

"Hurry on," the old Klingon snarled. "There are another ten in the back office, and it's soon time for you to return to the ghetto."

"Yes, sir," the boy said and quickly resumed his work. In the end, the skin looked almost alive. When he walked away from it, he turned back twice to stare at it, trying to get rid of the eerie feeling that the ghost of the branded man might ascend from hell and take revenge for his premature, violent death.

The last ten were easy, smaller pieces which he could just see as art exhibits, nothing that would ever haunt him like the other body.

When he was done, the old Klingon showed him to the door.

"What's your name?" the man asked.

"Tom Paris, sir," he replied.

"Did a good job, for a human," the Klingon replied, and dropped an extra coin into his hand. "Might call you again for a bit of work."

"Thank you."

"And maybe next time – " the Klingon eyed him with a thoughtful frown – "I might translate to you some of the writings on his body." He didn't need to elaborate which body he meant.

"That would be interesting, sir," Tom replied, trying not to show how creepy he found the idea. When the door closed, he started running and only stopped when he was home, falling down on his knees in the middle of the small kitchen.

"Tom, what happened?" his mother asked wide-eyed. "You look as if you've seen a ghost."

"It's – alright," the boy managed to say when he'd caught his breath. "Here's the money and some extra."

"Good. Do you think he'll call again? We really could use the money."

"I doubt it," Tom said. "I better go looking for another job."

He never went there again, but it took a long time before he stopped dreaming about the nameless human and his beautiful, terrible skin.

***

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Date: 2009-10-02 02:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] illariy.livejournal.com
Creepy! I liked the inclusion of Tom Paris but what I found most intriguing was the idea of a Klingon-dominated Earth and your OMC, the collector.

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Date: 2009-10-02 04:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] syredronning.livejournal.com
:) Thank you! I like the collector too *G*

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Date: 2009-10-02 03:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zerrah.livejournal.com
Omg, now I know what the warning was for! So creepy, and yet really interesting way to explain events leading up to that point. I guess Kirk eventually did get McCoy. *shiver*

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Date: 2009-10-02 04:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] syredronning.livejournal.com
We will never know what exactly happened *twinkles*

And yeah, my warnings are meant for real :) I frequently like to kill characters or do other nasty things to them.

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Date: 2009-10-02 07:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] weepingnaiad.livejournal.com
*swallows* That... *shudders* beautifully done. A terrible vision of the downfall of the Empire and what comes after.

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Date: 2009-10-02 08:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] syredronning.livejournal.com
Thank you! I tried to, eh, please :) (or something like that).

P.S: Love your Empire icon!

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Date: 2009-10-03 01:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] severinne.livejournal.com
Incredibly shiver-inducing, and you may call it an epilogue but it practically begs the question of how McCoy came to lose Spock's sigil on his collarbone... my money's on Kirk but I wouldn't put it past you to be hiding an ace up your sleeve.

Oh, and Tom Paris made me giggle. *g*

But yes, very dark, strangely satisfying indeed. :)

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Date: 2009-10-03 01:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] syredronning.livejournal.com
:)))))))) So happy about making you shiver in a good way :))))

There ain't no aces up my sleeve; this was very, very likely the last story of the series, and it will remain to the reader's discretion to think about possible explanations. Sorry for that :)

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Date: 2009-10-04 05:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] diane-kepler.livejournal.com
This series must continue. It rocks!

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Date: 2009-10-04 11:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] syredronning.livejournal.com
Hi! Well - in my brain, it's over. What would you have in mind for more sequels?

BTW, we're in contact with Selek, the brain behind the VLD again, and we'll see that it will get updated more (seems he updates, but the changes never make it into our mail folders/database).

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Date: 2009-10-04 10:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] diane-kepler.livejournal.com
Oh, thanks for the note about Selek. I was wondering if you think there's any chance of doing any more categorizing in the VLD, perhaps something along the lines of what my friend and co-author [livejournal.com profile] proudcockatrice is doing with his <ahref="http://groundline.net/testing/oriondict/">Orion Language Dictionary. Do you see how he's made a Parts of Speech index? Something like that for the VLD would be incredibly useful. I've found that it was quite difficult to actually use the VLD to write Vulcan sentences because I kept forgetting the little pronouns, prepositions, etc that are so very difficult to look up because they're so _shirt_

I'm sending this to you as well as Selek himself because it seems like it would require cooperation between Selek and the people like your man who actually run the database.

Anyway, regarding sequels to your story, my mind naturally gravitated to The Book's chapters. Does Spock tend to mark McCoy when he's more displeased than normal? During times of jealousy? Were there any words or sentences that McCoy particularly liked or hated? Were there any times that he didn't know what something meant until after it was burned into his skin? If so, what was his reaction when he found out?

Stuff like that :)

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Date: 2009-10-05 07:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] syredronning.livejournal.com
On the fly - I like your enthusiasm but now we're all three a bit confused. Please give us some time to get de-confused :) Read you later!

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Date: 2009-10-10 01:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*shudders helplessly* Oh, that's deeply, deeply creepy indeed. Well and atmospherically done. (Oh, Tom.)

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Date: 2009-10-10 01:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] syredronning.livejournal.com
Thank you! *happy*

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Date: 2009-10-18 04:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] merkuria.livejournal.com
Thanks for the link, otherwise I would probably have missed this and that would have been a shame.The entire series is superbly dark, but the last installment ups the creepiness like whoa; I love stories like that taking me to unexpected places.

Also, it's probably the third time that I end up in your journal, which is a clear sign I need to friend you!

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Date: 2009-11-02 08:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] syredronning.livejournal.com
Ah, I never replied to your feedback so far - thank you!

Glad you liked this dark series. It was fun to write :)

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Date: 2009-11-02 08:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ayalesca.livejournal.com
Wow, how did I miss this the first time!? It is the perfect amount of creepy, and you withhold the exact right amount of information from us. Don't tell us what happened - the point of the story is in the mystery. I love you. This is what darkfic should be. *bows at feet*

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Date: 2009-11-02 08:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] syredronning.livejournal.com
Thank you!! :) I wouldn't have bet on meeting your taste with this one.

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Date: 2009-11-02 08:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ayalesca.livejournal.com
Oh, well, I requested a cannibalism K/Mc on the kink meme, so my taste can run to the very, very dark. Such stories are pretty much never handled as well as you did here, so I guess it doesn't really comes up much.

the collector

Date: 2009-11-03 07:48 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Wooo... Nice. My only complaint: It's *way* too short, all this series -- they want to be big old long stories, love!!

But hell, nice to see new from thee ;-)>

Greywolf, who prefers tats to brands -- but to each their own -- basically, I don't heal burns at all well and they're tedious.

Re: the collector

Date: 2010-03-19 12:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] syredronning.livejournal.com
Late to reply - THANK YOU :)

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Date: 2010-03-12 10:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stormatdusk.livejournal.com
*shivers* i love all the places your muses took you to with this prompt. wonderful!

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Date: 2010-03-19 12:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] syredronning.livejournal.com
Never saw your comment in my mails, so I'm glad I just came across the lj-entry. Thank you so much for your feedback! I'm happy you enjoyed this kinky ficlet series :)

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Date: 2010-03-18 11:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vala3.livejournal.com
Just found these ficlets and had to respond. They are creepily erotically beautiful in an extremely harsh way. But most assurdly representing the harshness of the mirrorverse and the final installment injected us with the final horror. Great job.

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Date: 2010-03-19 12:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] syredronning.livejournal.com
Thank you! This series was fun to write, glad you enjoyed them in all their dark glory :))

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