quick beta help needed.

Am braindead but the MU story is almost ready for posting...except for this freshly-written snippet. ( short text, PG, would appreciate a quick checkup by native speaker. Thank you! )

EDIT: DONE - thank you! :)

Hmmm.

Talk went okay (but not perfect); I have at least one competitor from the same project agency (met her today); I doubt I get the project.

Hamburg techwriter company mailed and wants results tomorrow. Fine, if that results in money, hmmm. It also means I'll be busy tomorrow morning.

Am very, very tired and my knees aches. Only real achievement today: corrected both MU parts, made the txt and html files, and prepared the 7+2 postings. I only need that part (points to last posting) corrected, if there's a bug. Please, anyone? *begs shamelessly*

P.S. When I chose that situation for the "calm" mood, it was very Freudian...

MU part 6!

Found and Lost - NC-17++, stuff with nightmare potential *coughs*